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Lit & Soc – Writer’s Revision Sheet
Original
(what you wrote)
 Revision
(how it changed after feedback)
 Explanation/Rule
(catchy way to remember next time)
turly
 truly
 Spelling
we stopped hanging out and talking to her
 we stopped hanging out and didn't talk to her
 flows more and keeps the writing in past tense
and push all our judgments away for now
 and push away all the judgments we had
 keep writing in past tense
The Journey Of Education
 Teaching is a Selfless Act
 I changed the title to fit in a theme throughout the project
no heading
 headings
 I added headings to the sections of my paper to, again, create a common theme